This design is getting there in terms of fitting in more around the style that i personally like. However i still feel it is not really working to the style or standard that i want in my work. It doesn't look clean, sharp or bold enough to actually be used as a poster, and the colors just don't stand out at all. Its muted and simple but not in a way to make it interesting and engaging! Also the way the hat, tea pot and liquid do not stand out from the background to really grip the viewer into looking at the poster. As i judge my work by thinking if i was to walk past this would i stop and look? Which for this design is no, so it's not doing the job or meeting the requirements for my brief!
As for the quality of the image it is reasonably good and doesn't look terrible or anything. But yet isn't at that professionally quality i would expect from a graphic designer- Which is what i want to do. For example like my tutor pointed out the tea doesn't look like tea it looks like a thick, gloomy liquid in the way it falls. Which i agree with.
From doing this i am now going to have a rethink as to what other angles i can pursue this poster idea from, so i engage my target audience easier.
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